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\nPupil outcome: I can edit and revise the content of a descriptive piece to improve it. Key learning points: - Proofreading is an active process that enables us to spot and correct errors in written work. - Changing your verbs and nouns...\nPupil outcome: I can edit and revise the content of a descriptive piece to improve it. Key learning points: - Proofreading is an active process that enables us to spot and correct errors in written work. - Changing your verbs and nouns to ones that work together can create a semantic field or overall atmosphere. - You can link two closely related sentences with a semi-colon. - Add a sentence that starts with a present participle to transport the reader into a scene.\n
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24:37
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Pre-K - Higher Ed
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Subjects
Social Studies & History
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Instructional Videos
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2023
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English
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For Teacher Use
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Fine Print: Educational Use
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proofreading
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semantic field, atmosphere, semicolon, present participle, learning cycle, scattered evidence, heart pounding, explosion rocked, guards rushed, narrow alley, skyscrapers soaring, ceaseless pursuit, fantastic effort, fantastic job, push play, debris filled, totally rewriting
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