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\nPupil outcome: I can write a descriptive scene about a dark, stormy night. Key learning points: - Sentences should be said aloud before writing to ensure they make sense and read back once written to check for errors. - Ambitious...\nPupil outcome: I can write a descriptive scene about a dark, stormy night. Key learning points: - Sentences should be said aloud before writing to ensure they make sense and read back once written to check for errors. - Ambitious vocabulary and figurative language create a vivid picture in the reader's mind. - Writers choose varied fronted adverbials and different sentence types to ensure the text flows for the reader. - Careful selection of nouns and pronouns ensures cohesion within sentences and across sections of a written piece. - Past simple, progressive and perfect verb forms can be used to improve text cohesion.\n
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33:47
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Pre-K - Higher Ed
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Social Studies & History
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2023
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English
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figurative language
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zoom-in, text flow, fronted adverbial, past tense, make sense, sentence type, falling heavily, sombre teardrops, main clause, haunting rhythm, relative pronoun, success criteria, coordinating conjunction, negative image, frontal adverbial, angry beast, branches outstretched
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