This Focus on Writing a Letter to Persuade: Making Writing Less Wordy worksheet also includes:
Assist your class with concise writing. Using this learning exercise, learners examine the use of pronouns to make writing less wordy. In order to do this, they complete a letter in which they persuade the teacher to get a class pet, book, or game. Scholars use we, or us, to replace the words, our class. The activity references a model. This model is provided in additional materials.