Sophia: Revision Technique: Thesis and Support

This slideshow lesson focuses on assessing and revising the thesis, topic sentences, and supporting details in a paper. It uses the analogy of the body: the thesis and topic sentences are the bones and the supporting details are the muscles. It explains how to assess the bones first, offers questions to ask about them, and provides an example; next it explains how to assess the muscles, tells what to look for, and provides an example. It then suggests an outline to identify any missing information.