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Crafting character through dialogue
Pupil outcome: I can carefully craft a character through the use of dialogue. Key learning points: - Dialogue should be punctuated and laid out clearly and accurately to make it clear who is speaking. - The reporting clause is helpful...
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Using punctuation in poetry
Pupil outcome: I can use a range of punctuation for effect in poetry. Key learning points: - Punctuation is important in poetry as it shows the reader when to pause for meaning or dramatic effect. - The same punctuation we use to write...
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Writing complete sentences and correcting sentence fragments
Pupil outcome: I can identify complete sentences and correct sentence fragments. Key learning points: - A complete sentence has a subject, a verb and expresses a complete idea. - A sentence fragment is an incomplete sentence, lacking a...
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Using punctuation accurately in dystopian descriptions
Pupil outcome: I can use a range of basic punctuation in my dystopian descriptions. Key learning points: - Accurate puncutation helps make your writing clear - Each piece of punctuation has a different purpose - You should use each piece...
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Improving an essay on Prospero's power over Caliban in 'The Tempest'
Pupil outcome: I can understand how to review and edit my work. Key learning points: - Having accurate spelling, punctuation and grammar allows your work to be clearly understood. - Using synonyms for key words in the question shows a...
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Exploring the characters' emotions in 'The Day the Crayons Quit'
Pupil outcome: I can understand the reasons that the different characters write a letter in ‘The Day the Crayons Quit’ by exploring their emotions. Key learning points: - The crayons in ‘The Day the Crayons Quit’ use letters to explain...
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Editing the diet section of a non-chronological report about aye-ayes
Pupil outcome: I can edit a section of a non-chronological report. Key learning points: - Editing is an essential part of the writing process. - Editing does not involve rewriting the entire piece but being selective about what to edit...
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Writing the conclusion of a non-chronological report about healthy lifestyle
Pupil outcome: I can write the conclusion of a non-chronological report about healthy lifestyle. Key learning points: - The purpose of a conclusion is to summarise the information of the text for the reader. - A summary sentence is one...
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Writing the end of a letter: 'Anna Hibiscus' Song'
Pupil outcome: I can write questions to a character using a question mark. Key learning points: - A letter may include questions which you have to reply to - A further question might be asked at the end of the letter so someone can reply...
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Revising sentence and punctuation types for a dystopian description
Pupil outcome: I can recall and practise how to write a technically accurate description. Key learning points: - Effective revision means that you can remember key information, without using your notes - Recalling examples of each of the...
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Practising handwriting with more famous quotations
Pupil outcome: I can correctly copy out famous quotations in cursive handwriting. Key learning points: - A famous quotation is a well-known phrase, statement, or passage attributed to a particular person, work, or source. - The quotation...
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Character description of Jack in 'Jack and the Beanstalk'
Pupil outcome: I can join two ideas together when describing Jack. Key learning points: - Adjectives can be used to describe a character's appearance and personality, such as 'small, sneaky Jack' - When using two adjectives, a comma is...
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Analysing ideas of time, identity and place in Seneviratne’s 'A Wider View'
Pupil outcome: I can understand how Seneviratne uses structure and language to express ideas of time, identity and place in 'A Wider View'. Key learning points: - The structure of a poem arguably represents the journey of a concept or...
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Analysing how Hood presents the past and present in 'I Remember, I Remember'
Pupil outcome: I can explain how Hood uses personification, symbolism and punctuation to express ideas of past and present in ‘I Remember, I Remember’. Key learning points: - The personification of the sun in Hood's childhood creates a...
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Analysing John McCrae’s call to arms in ‘In Flanders Fields’
Pupil outcome: I can explain how McCrae uses natural imagery, euphonic sounds and structure to present a call to arms. Key learning points: - The natural imagery of the poppy and the lark suggests that it's natural to die for your...
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Writing the conclusion of a non-chronological report about Portia spiders
Pupil outcome: I can write the conclusion of a non-chronological report about Portia spiders. Key learning points: - The purpose of a conclusion is to summarise the information from the text. - A summary sentence summarises the key...
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Writing descriptive sentences about the setting in 'Anna Hibiscus' Song'
Pupil outcome: I can join two ideas together to write a descriptive sentence. Key learning points: - An adjective or list of adjectives can describe a noun, such as 'sweet mango' or 'noisy, chirping birds' - Describing a setting using...
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Writing the middle of the story: 'The Magic Porridge Pot'
Pupil outcome: I can write the middle of the story. Key learning points: - Sequencing language can be used at the start of a sentence, such as 'Suddenly,' - The middle of a story introduces the main plot and problem, such as the porridge...
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Writing the beginning of a story, introducing character and setting: 'Jack and the Beanstalk'
Pupil outcome: I can write the beginning of a traditional tale, introducing the characters and setting. Key learning points: - Traditional tales are mostly told in the past tense - The beginning of a story introduces the main characters,...
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Writing a section about Florence Nightingale in a non chronological report
Pupil outcome: I can write a section about Florence Nightingale in a non-chronological report. Key learning points: - A viewpoint is how you see or feel about something. - Viewpoint fronted adverbials are sentence starters that share the...
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Self-editing the build-up of 'A Kind of Spark'
Pupil outcome: I can edit my own build-up of ’A Kind of Spark’, aiming to improve the punctuation, text cohesion and vocabulary. Key learning points: - Editing is a critical part of the writing process. - Writing is most successful when...
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Peer editing a persuasive letter
Pupil outcome: I can edit my own and my peer's persuasive letters. Key learning points: - Editing is the process of making changes to improve our writing. - Editing can be done by oneself, with a peer or with a teacher. - When editing...
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Writing the second part of a journalistic report about a climate protest
Pupil outcome: I can write the second and third main paragraphs of a journalistic report about a fictional climate protest. Key learning points: - A journalistic report has a formal tone and combines factual statements with different...
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Editing paragraphs of a narrative in 'Whale Rider'
Pupil outcome: I can edit the opening and build-up of a narrative in 'Whale Rider'. Key learning points: - Editing is the process of making changes to improve our writing. - To edit punctuation, missing or incorrectly used capital...