Pupil outcome: I can edit and revise the content of a persuasive speech to improve it. Key learning points: - Proof-reading is an active process, that enables us to spot and correct errors in written work. - Reading your work aloud can...

This video discusses run-on and fragment sentences and the ways to correct them.

Pupil outcome: I can edit and revise the content of a descriptive piece to improve it. Key learning points: - Proofreading is an active process that enables us to spot and correct errors in written work. - Changing your verbs and nouns...

A video entitled “Finalizing Writing” which explores three steps of the writing process: revising, editing, and publishing.

Struggling to write a topic sentence? Are you trying to figure out how to start your body paragraph?



In this video, I give you eight easy steps to writing both an advanced and basic topic sentence. First, I review THREE...

In this video, the teacher provides a step-by-step guide on how to make a persuasive essay easy to read and well-organized. The lesson covers the importance of stating a claim and providing evidence, as well as the three steps of the...

In this video, the teacher explains how to make a persuasive opinion essay easy to read by organizing ideas and evidence using paragraph form. The teacher emphasizes the importance of having clear topic sentences and provides examples of...

In this video, the teacher explains how to ensure that the evidence in a persuasive speech connects to the thesis statement. The teacher outlines three steps: rereading with a purpose, checking if the speech is going off track, and...

Organizing a basic paragraph can be very difficult.....that is why I am here to help you write an awesome body paragraph! In this video, I provide a clear example of how to format and organize a paragraph for beginners in 3 easy...

In this video, the teacher explains how to ensure that the evidence in a persuasive speech aligns with the thesis statement. The lesson covers the importance of strong thesis statements, the three stages of the writing process, and three...

Wondering how to end your essay well? Trying to write a conclusion paragraph to wrap up your essay with an A+? In this video, I review the structure, outline and steps to writing a conclusion paragraph.



First, I cover the...

"Grammar and Usage Edits" provides examples of mistakes that must be revised to correct errors in grammar and usage in writing.

Mr. Griot models how to use a rubric to revise the first draft of his biography and how to use the proofreading checklist to proofread and edit his writing.

Mr. Griot models using rubrics and checklists to self-evaluate and edit the rough draft of his informative essay.

Pupil outcome: I can understand how to refine my work in clear and identifiable ways. Key learning points: - Free writing is designed to help you unleash your creativity. - Revising is where you look at or consider again a piece of...

In this video, the teacher discusses how to make a persuasive opinion essay more convincing by reorganizing the supporting evidence. They explain the importance of claims and provide examples, and also review the writing process of...

In this video, the teacher explains how to prove a point using evidence. They emphasize the importance of having strong feelings about the topic in order to effectively prove one's thinking. The teacher also guides the students through...

Mr. Griot works to revise, edit, and add details to a personal narrative. He then models writing the final copy of a personal narrative.

In this video, the teacher explains how to improve the flow and coherence of a persuasive opinion essay by using transition words. The teacher reviews the writing process and the importance of revising to enhance the quality of writing....

Pupil outcome: I can edit, revise and rewrite my descriptive writing. Key learning points: - Editing is the process of making technical corrections to a piece of writing. - Accurate spelling, punctuation and grammar is essential to help...

Pupil outcome: I can use effective strategies to revise and improve an essay. Key learning points: - Topic sentences need to be clear and linked to the question. - Main and supporting quotations from the text are used to justify...

Pupil outcome: I can use effective editing strategies to revise and rewrite a response. Key learning points: - Revising and editing written work is a great way to improve our writing skills overall. - Improving vocabulary choices and...

Learn how (and why) to use the amazing SAS Writing Reviser to make your writing the very best it can be. Who doesn't need a totally non-judgemental writing reviser from Time to time?

Mr. Griot reviews the elements of a newspaper article. Then he uses the proofreading checklist and identifies and corrects errors.